Hey, I finally finished my story. Hope you liked it; I really put a lot of effort into it. Do you kind of have a feeling that you’re one of the characters in the story or you just have a 3^rd person perspective? The ending is one of the best because I’ve took it from a scene from a Mtv. Well I didn’t really bite off of them, I was looking for an unforgettable, sad ending and that Mtv gave me an idea. Oh wells, hope you benefited from or learned something from my story.

     This story is really created for Shu, I hope she liked it as well as I did. It’s really hard to put all you feelings in a diary form all the time so I created something new to attract my viewers. This story came out of my heart and feelings.

     Yesterday was one of my cherished memories. It was Shu’s Birthday Surprise, which I’ve planned over a month. I’ve tried to make it her best birthday ever, but I guessed failed. What caused my failure? I really don’t know, guessing just my emotions. Sometimes it’s really hard to act in front of her. My friend asked me a very good question “Are you going to present it to her as a Boyfriend? Ex? Friend?” This answer to this question I really don’t know. I’m always having mixed feelings. Sometimes I feel like hugging her or talking to her but I have to hold it in because I’ve lost that privilege. Well I’ll explain more next time.

     I was really excited when I woke up in the morning. I dressed up really fast and charged out the door. I called my friend and asked him to lead the way to the flower shop, which opens before 9. I felt so stupid when I was downstairs, I’ve forgot to bring my backpack. Ahhhh… I then had to run back up to get it. I once again charged down the stairs. Running at a tremendous speed, I almost can in to a car. I didn’t want my friend to wait for me since he was doing me a big favor already.

     When I got to the shop I begged for 12 roses but they didn’t sell a dozen. I then had to pay for HumHum (Can’t tell) roses. I’ve never seen flowers as beautiful as it. First mission of the surprise wasn’t so surprising. She somehow knew I was at that corner hiding. ???? Well, It just went on with another half a dozen flowers to represent her birthday, 12/6. LoL creative aren’t I?

     I waited anxiously till after school and her responses. I was kind of afraid that she wouldn’t go to the movies with me but I had a pretty good feeling she didn’t want to. After I brought her home I hasty went to Elizabeth Center to buy her another present that I’ve been searching for a while. I then went home to prepare for everything. (The Night Surprise)

     We then went to eat. At that dinner I didn’t felt so good but I still hung on. I felt a little sick but I didn’t want to disappoint her so I didn’t spoke much and also didn’t eat much. I’m sorry; if I’ve been a little happier it would have been a better birthday for her.

     After we’ve finish, it was kind of late so she suggested that we shouldn’t watch a movie this late. As much as I wanted to I answered Okay. While we were walking home she said me to carry her. Hehe. I still remember the last time she asked me to, mad heavy. It was about 3 months ago. Shu and her sister insisted that we should hangout together. At that same day she hanged me one of the many presents that I adore, a name chain with a symbol of her next to it. (The one on my cell phone) She was wearing high heels like yesterday. She asked me to carry her because she was unable to walk with those high heels. So I did. Her sister was shocked about my willingness. Yeah those were the times. I once again answered okay but she rejected her own offer so I stood quiet. I then brought her to a dark alley with no presents. She was scare and so was I. I’ve picked my favor spot for the Night Surprise. I told her to close her eye and she did. When she opened it, a hallowed glow was before her eyes. It was a candle that was decorated in a cup of jelly form. I asked her to make a wish then blow it out. Wow. I didn’t know she had so much to wish for. After she made her wish or wishes I told her to close her eyes once again. I put my arms around her and put on a necklace that I brought for her. I didn’t know did she like it because she’s that type that tells you its good when it’s bad. Well I could tell most of the times. I then sang happy birthday to her. OMG I’ve never thought I could sing right on the pitch. It was kind of late, I had to go home. I watched her while she walked up the stairs. I ran home as fast as I could. I felt kind of dizzy and ill. My stomach was killing me. When I got home I collapsed, I went straight to sleep but I couldn’t. I really wanted to tell my mom it hurts but i couldn’t. She’s going to yell at me with daggering words. I was in so much pain but I still mange to sent Shu the ending of my story.